Friday 24 November 2017
writing my challenges
WALT:writing our challenges in our own words.first my class had to write there own challenges in there green book and plus we had to do step by step in our green book than once we finished with our green book we had to copy from our green to our Chromebooks but when had to put in hooks too.
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Kia Ora Jody,
ReplyDeleteWow! It's very brave of you to write about something so personal. I am very proud of you for being so open and honest.
I can see you have grouped your ideas, used topic sentences and used heading to help your reader, it's really effective.
Perhaps next time you could just change the colour of the font so it is easier to look at. (maybe it's just my old eyes).